tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post1411227102292134532..comments2023-09-26T19:03:51.725+05:30Comments on आरंभन: दरियाS.VIKRAMhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17252464333035334396noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post-64894362128498820992010-11-27T21:44:40.557+05:302010-11-27T21:44:40.557+05:30Beautiful as always.
It is pleasure reading your p...Beautiful as always.<br />It is pleasure reading your poems.संजय भास्कर https://www.blogger.com/profile/08195795661130888170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post-862647770890890842010-11-24T17:45:50.131+05:302010-11-24T17:45:50.131+05:30कई घरों मे लगी आग है बुझाई मैंने,
पर जो खुद मुझमे ...कई घरों मे लगी आग है बुझाई मैंने,<br />पर जो खुद मुझमे लगी है वो बुझाऊँ कैसे ?<br />fantabulos lines bro...u r just terrific..ummmmhhaasurajhttp://surajthoughts.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post-1261328588404283482010-11-24T17:44:59.319+05:302010-11-24T17:44:59.319+05:30इस टिप्पणी को लेखक द्वारा हटा दिया गया है.S.Vikramhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12898461266298393402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post-84225227045281983552010-11-24T17:37:33.622+05:302010-11-24T17:37:33.622+05:30सुन्दर रचना ,.......सांकेतिकता ने छू लिया...सुन्दर रचना ,.......सांकेतिकता ने छू लिया...vishalhttp://crazyvishal.blogspot.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post-13493500893610117072010-11-24T17:33:30.910+05:302010-11-24T17:33:30.910+05:30very gud post....very gud post....Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post-23645342651777759942010-11-24T17:30:04.036+05:302010-11-24T17:30:04.036+05:30बहुत सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति|बहुत सुन्दर अभिव्यक्ति|Patali-The-Villagehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08855726404095683355noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post-70686766735106851602010-11-24T17:28:38.367+05:302010-11-24T17:28:38.367+05:30Waah Bhai..........Lajwaab.....Dil Ko Cheer Kar Ra...Waah Bhai..........Lajwaab.....Dil Ko Cheer Kar Rakh Diya.........gr888888888...shivpshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16085334283669680337noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2293254081967211323.post-51187550548242733462010-11-24T16:48:53.506+05:302010-11-24T16:48:53.506+05:30बहुत बढ़िया भावपूर्ण रचना ... इसमें ये लाइन जोड़ द...बहुत बढ़िया भावपूर्ण रचना ... इसमें ये लाइन जोड़ दें ... चल दरिया में डूब जाए ... हा हासमयचक्रhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05186719974225650425noreply@blogger.com